Thursday, November 19, 2015

To pen, or not?

“Okay class, today we’ll do essay writing!”
“Nooo!”
“Aww, come on teach, could we just do grammar?”
“Let me think about it, hmm....nope.”

Faces cringed, morale declined and movements slowed down—it’s like watching a scene from the movie Matrix. Throughout the few years of teaching English the feeling when your students are engaged with you in the class no matter how difficult the task is is the most priceless moments. Because at that moment of time you can feel that spark, that eagerness to learn and to be inspired.

            Writing an essay is not entirely difficult. It requires planning and execution—and a bit of creativity. It’s a form of personal expression. You begin by thinking of a topic or a theme to write about. To make your task easier start off by writing down an outline for your essay. Break down your essay into points and arrange it starting from introduction right until the closing/ending. Some people list down their points, some do in the form of a mind map, basically there are many ways that you can do this—try to find a method of outlining that helps you to express your ideas better.

Let’s say for example you wanted to write about “The Benefits of Sports”. It is important to take note that your introduction is the most crucial part of your essay. This is where you reel your readers in by making it as interesting as possible. Below are a few sample starters:

“Did you know that the Greeks were the ones who started the Olympic games?”

“I still can’t get over last night’s match, it was a close shave for Malaysia but in the end we won the gold medal for archery!”

            Secondly, comes the main event. Which is writing out the content of your essay. Remember the outline? All you need to do now is to elaborate on the important points that you have listed. Those are going to be your topic sentences. What is a topic sentence some of you might ask? Well, to put it simply, it’s a sentence that conveys your main idea. Usually it is written in the same paragraph. I shall give you another example—I love examples, they give the necessary details to your thoughts. Anyways here they are;

Topic Sentence
Getting involved in physical activities such as sports will definitely improve our health.

Elaboration
This is because when we do sports we will sweat and this helps in getting rid of the toxins from our body. Plus, sweating also helps us lose that extra pounds.

Relevant Information
Cycling is a good sport to start with if you looking for something to burn off the calories.

            As you can see, from the example above, I have broken it into three main parts. These are the elements that complete a paragraph. The topic sentence will be your main idea. Then, it is followed by an elaboration, which is an extension of your main idea. And you can add on some relevant information to give it more substance.  


            Lastly, will be your closing/ending. This is where you summarise what you have written. The easiest way is to repeat your title and add a few words and that is it. That does not sound exciting does it? Make your ending more believable—like you really mean what you wrote. Again, there are tons of ways to end an essay. The most important thing is that you try not to stray away from your original topic. End your essay with a bang! Hopefully this piece is of benefit. May Allah forgive me for my shortcomings and He knows best. Happy writing!

Thursday, January 1, 2015

Dear students
By: Haziq

My dear students...

As much as it pains me;
To utter these words of discouragement,
To ban you from the very modern apparatus that has helped you;
In ways you couldn't have imagined,
The very apparatus that puts the world at the tip of your fingers.

My dear students...

Know that every stroke of the keyboard is just a ruse;
You can say that you can learn many things from it,
You can say that the games that you've played on it are your very lifeline;
Without it the world will plunge into darkness,
You can say that it simplify your work,
People say we are more "connected",
Are we?
It certainly feel more distant.

My dear students...

What happened?
You are not listening!
"Excuse me, are you chatting with your friends while I am teaching?!"
Grumbled, Embarrassed, Pique;
Such resentment;
A heavy price, for a simple reminder.

My dear students...

We stand here, in front of you,
Never to pick on you, But to always encourage you,
We stand here, in front of you,
Never to shout at you, But to always remind you with love and care,
We stand here, in front of you,
Never to strike fear, But to always help you to be brave,
We stand here, in front of you,
Never to belittle you, But to always inspire you.

My dear students...

Start learning,
Start listening,
Take a pen, jot down notes,
Read a book,
Talk to people,
Help those in need,
Be steadfast and have patience,
And most importantly be mindful of Allah;
The One and Only to be worshipped.

My dear students...

Modern apparatus will never benefit you;
Not until, you observe your intentions,
Not until, you take into account all your actions,
Not until, you learn to be just,
And Not until, you learn to value time.